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"The pity of war"
What a prompt.
I suppose you want sandy soldiers,
Abandoned, blasted humvees, and
Rusting rifles, hmm?
The sorrow of the volunteer
Who threw his life away.

Do not pity soldiers.
Do not mourn.
They were not dragged or beaten
Or drafted to fight.
They would not know
Ultimate sacrifice
If it held them close on a holiday,
And begged them to stay
(Just please, please)
One more day.

The pity of war is not
That youth should die,
But that
It should die so indifferently.
This is not war as of old:
Man against man.
It is man against mother.
Man against child.
Pride against helpless love.

Oh! How much easier it is to leave
Than to be left.
Next time you cry for the wasted dead
Ask yourself,
"Who lost
The Lost Generation?"
:iconanameroma:
Paint always chips when there's no one there to maintain it.

This is an entry for Penessence's contest over here:
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I don't hold out much hope of winning, but I thought I'd enter anyway.
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~angel-in-pieces Oct 26, 2010  Student Writer
A creative take on the prompt - I like its honesty. The final stanza is really poignant; an excellent way to round off the piece.
Congrats! :heart:
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:iconanameroma:
Thank you so much!
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~angel-in-pieces Oct 27, 2010  Student Writer
You're welcome! (:
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:iconwolfrug:
Got here via Tuttlebird's journal, and just wanted to say: awesomesauce. Good stuff, seriously. :+fav:
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:iconanameroma:
Thank you so much! And extra thanks for the favorite. :D
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*rlkirkland Oct 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
A viewpoint powerfully painted.
Congratulations for your second place finish. :sun:
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~beautifulhikariiugly Aug 8, 2010  Student General Artist
fdhfbjsdbafa. you are srsly so talented. like whoa. i couldn't even dream of coming up with stuff this good!
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:iconanameroma:
Thank you so much! You always make me smile ;D
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~beautifulhikariiugly Aug 8, 2010  Student General Artist
PSHAW. anytime, broski. it's my job.
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